Writing+feedback

feedback on Gigi and Jenna - Oh so quiet Used 3 or more paragraphs, separated ideas clearly into different areas __ Example: __ The first paragraph is the introduction of the music. The second paragraph is about the story of the music video. The third paragraph is about their reflection of the whole music video. **Vocabulary ****: ** Used most linking words- a good variety of vocabulary and few mistakes __ Example: __ linking word: because, although vocabulary: hilarious, terrific, unique **Grammar: ** Used a variety of tenses to show change in meaning – many mistakes __Example:__ The second paragraph should use past tense. **Overall: ** Completed the task – few mistakes and clear meaning __ Overall comment: __ A good music review with details. ||
 * Structure **** : **