When you first hear the name of the song, you may think that it is a very quiet song. Contrary to your prediction, it is totally a quite fast and noisy song. A girl sang the song quietly at the beginning, walking out a shop. Then, she said ‘Su!’ and held for a few seconds. Suddenly, the rhythm was brisk and became faster. She danced cheerfully while she sang then. Everybody accompanied her gradually. They danced happily. However, suddenly again, the rhythm became slower and slower. She was whispering and singing extremely quietly. On the street, the rubbish bin and flowers were brought to life and walked with her. When the rhythm became faster, the rubbish bin danced with her. When the rhythm slowed down, the rubbish bin went away. This action repeated several times till the end of the music. In our point of view, we are quite confused. The girl kept telling everybody to keep silence, but she made noise by herself. The name of the song didn’t match it. The melody was quite good. We were relaxed and always waiting the next action of the girl. Nevertheless, it was too spurred to hear what she was singing. And the girl was so ugly and disgusting that we even just wanted to listen to the music and closed our eyes! It was much better to change the character. All in all, we think it’s a quite good song, as if the audience will become so quiet while they listen. You may give it a go.
A girl sang the song quietly at the beginning, walking out a shop. Then, she said ‘Su!’ and held for a few seconds. Suddenly, the rhythm was brisk and became faster. She danced cheerfully while she sang then. Everybody accompanied her gradually. They danced happily. However, suddenly again, the rhythm became slower and slower. She was whispering and singing extremely quietly. On the street, the rubbish bin and flowers were brought to life and walked with her. When the rhythm became faster, the rubbish bin danced with her. When the rhythm slowed down, the rubbish bin went away. This action repeated several times till the end of the music.
In our point of view, we are quite confused. The girl kept telling everybody to keep silence, but she made noise by herself. The name of the song didn’t match it. The melody was quite good. We were relaxed and always waiting the next action of the girl. Nevertheless, it was too spurred to hear what she was singing. And the girl was so ugly and disgusting that we even just wanted to listen to the music and closed our eyes! It was much better to change the character.
All in all, we think it’s a quite good song, as if the audience will become so quiet while they listen. You may give it a go.