feedback on Gigi and Jenna - Oh so quiet Structure: Used 3 or more paragraphs, separated ideas clearly into different areas Example:
The first paragraph is the introduction of the music. The second paragraph is about the story of the music video. The third paragraph is about their reflection of the whole music video. Vocabulary: Used most linking words- a good variety of vocabulary and few mistakes Example:
linking word: because, although
vocabulary: hilarious, terrific, unique Grammar: Used a variety of tenses to show change in meaning – many mistakes Example: The second paragraph should use past tense. Overall: Completed the task – few mistakes and clear meaning Overall comment: A good music review with details.
feedback on Gigi and Jenna - Oh so quiet
Structure:
Used 3 or more paragraphs, separated ideas clearly into different areas
Example:
The first paragraph is the introduction of the music. The second paragraph is about the story of the music video. The third paragraph is about their reflection of the whole music video.
Vocabulary:
Used most linking words- a good variety of vocabulary and few mistakes
Example:
linking word: because, although
vocabulary: hilarious, terrific, unique
Grammar:
Used a variety of tenses to show change in meaning – many mistakes
Example:
The second paragraph should use past tense.
Overall:
Completed the task – few mistakes and clear meaning
Overall comment:
A good music review with details.