{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"6060791","dateCreated":"1223631258","smartDate":"Oct 10, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"kayan1062","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/kayan1062","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tonycreaney.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/6060791"},"dateDigested":1532127468,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"The feedback from Connie","description":"Structure:<br \/>\nUsed one or two paragraphs, separate some ideas into different areas.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nExamples: They write their own feeling about this song into one paragraph and write the summary of the video into another paragraph.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nVocabulary:<br \/>\nUsed most linking words- a good variety of vocabulary and few mistakes <br \/>\n<br \/>\nExamples: They use the words, blurred and significant.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nGrammar: <br \/>\nUsed a variety of tenses to show change in meaning \u2013 many mistakes <br \/>\n<br \/>\nExamples: They use the present tense, present perfect and past tense. However, sometimes in one paragraph, they use past tense talking about<br \/>\nthe video. On the other paragraph, they use present tense suddenly, also talking about the video.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nOverall: <br \/>\nCompleted the task \u2013 few mistakes and clear meaning <br \/>\n<br \/>\nOverall comment:<br \/>\nThey thoroughly describe the atmosphere of the song and their feelings of the song. Furthermore, they use good vocabularies which can utterly describe their feelings. On the other hand, there are only a few grammar and typing mistakes. For instance, the last sentence: In conclusion, it is truly a great piece for and you me (you and me).","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}