{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"6197047","dateCreated":"1224145620","smartDate":"Oct 16, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"QCQC","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/QCQC","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tonycreaney.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/6197047"},"dateDigested":1532127459,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback on - Brian and Jeffrey-Romeo","description":"Structure: <br \/>\nUsed one or two paragraphs, separate some ideas into different areas <br \/>\n<br \/>\nExample: Although there seems to be four paragraphs, the last two are the same with the first two.The first paragraph is about the story and the music, and paragraph two is about their favourite part of the music video.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\nVocabulary: <br \/>\nUsed one or two linking words \u2013 some different vocabulary but many mistakes <br \/>\n<br \/>\nExample: Vocabulary:effects,humorous,crash, splash......<br \/>\nLinking words: although,and......<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\nGrammar: <br \/>\nUsed a variety of tenses to show change in meaning \u2013 many mistakes <br \/>\n<br \/>\nExample: They use past tense to describe the story but there is also some verbs in present tense eg.stop<br \/>\n<br \/>\nOverall: <br \/>\nCompleted the task \u2013 few mistakes and clear meaning <br \/>\nOverall comment: Since there was only two paragraphs,you can write more and you should be careful with the tenses. However,the ideas are clear. Not bad.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}