{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"6132785","dateCreated":"1223993778","smartDate":"Oct 14, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"kayan1062","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/kayan1062","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tonycreaney.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/6132785"},"dateDigested":1532127449,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"feedback from connie","description":"Structure:<br \/>\nUsed 3 or more paragraphs, separated ideas clearly into different areas <br \/>\nExamples: They use one paragraph to talk about the content of the vedio. They use the other paragraph to explain their feeling of the song, and their opinion.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nVocabulary:<br \/>\nUsed most linking words- a good variety of vocabulary and few mistakes <br \/>\nExamples: They use the words, 'surreal, bazarre and soul'. They also use the phrase, 'get into it' and 'pick up the pace'.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nGrammar:<br \/>\nUsed a variety of tenses to show change in meaning \u2013 many mistakes <br \/>\nExamples: They just use the present and present continuous tense to explain their ideas. <br \/>\n<br \/>\nOverall:<br \/>\nCompleted the task \u2013 few mistakes and clear meaning<br \/>\nOverall comment: They use many vocabularies which can thoroughly explain their own feelings of the song. Good! They also utterly tell us what is the vedio about. It is better to tell us whether they recommend or nor recommend the song.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"6132423","dateCreated":"1223992690","smartDate":"Oct 14, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"athenasara","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/athenasara","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tonycreaney.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/6132423"},"dateDigested":1532127449,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback from Athena","description":"Structure: Used 3 or more paragraphs, separated ideas clearly into different areas <br \/>\nExample: 2 for talking about the video, 1 for their personal response.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\nVocabulary: Used most linking words- a good variety of vocabulary and few mistakes <br \/>\nExample: Linking words such as thus, besides, however. new vocab such as hollow, get into it, bizarre.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\nGrammar: Used a variety of tenses to show change in meaning \u2013 few mistakes <br \/>\nExample: They come out and they MET someone? Are you using present tense or past tense.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nOverall: Completed the task \u2013 few mistakes and clear meaning <br \/>\nOverall comment: I think you should say more about your personal feeling, instead of what the MV is talking about. Moreover, you give me a feeling that you write the review in a Chinglish way. What I mean is that did you think in Chinese and wrote in English? For instance, &quot;they fight against each other&quot; rather than &quot;they have a fight&quot;(2nd last line from th2 2nd paragraph).","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}