{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"6197073","dateCreated":"1224145881","smartDate":"Oct 16, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"whk","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/whk","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tonycreaney.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/6197073"},"dateDigested":1532127418,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"feedback","description":"Structure: <br \/>\nUsed more than 3paragraphes , she also divide the contents clearly.<br \/>\nFor example: She express her feelings in a long paragraph .<br \/>\nComment:She should use more words to introduce the song . <br \/>\nVocabulary: <br \/>\nShe used many linking words and many vocabulary but there are some mistakes .  <br \/>\nFor example:<br \/>\nShe used the word 'actually'in a wrong way .<br \/>\n<br \/>\nGrammar: <br \/>\nShe used a diffrent tenses  <br \/>\nFor example:<br \/>\nShe used present tense for the vast majority of the paragraph , she also use some passt tense . <br \/>\nOverall: <br \/>\nShe gave marks to the song and finishes the task with a few mistakes!!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"6166045","dateCreated":"1224083531","smartDate":"Oct 15, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"kellykong0920","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/kellykong0920","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tonycreaney.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/6166045"},"dateDigested":1532127418,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback","description":"Structure: <br \/>\nUsed 3 or more paragraphs, separated ideas clearly into different areas <br \/>\nExample: She used some paragraphs to tell the story and 1 long paragrph to explain her feelings.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nVocabulary: <br \/>\nUsed most linking words- a good variety of vocabulary and few mistakes <br \/>\nExample: Actually, and, both, after<br \/>\n<br \/>\nGrammar: <br \/>\nUsed a variety of tenses to show change in meaning \u2013 few mistakes <br \/>\nExample: Mostly use present tense, but also some past tense in good explaination.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nOverall: <br \/>\nCompleted the task \u2013 few mistakes and clear meaning <br \/>\nOverall comment: Very good, she can give asome advice and use some questions.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}