{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"6252907","dateCreated":"1224302587","smartDate":"Oct 17, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"Thomaslo","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Thomaslo","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1224319750\/Thomaslo-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tonycreaney.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/6252907"},"dateDigested":1532127417,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback","description":"Structure: <br \/>\nUsed 3 or more paragraphs, separated ideas clearly into different areas <br \/>\nExample: Divide the main part into two paragraphs and a paragraph of summary<br \/>\n<br \/>\nVocabulary: <br \/>\nUsed one or two linking words \u2013 some different vocabulary but many mistakes <br \/>\nExample: At last, such as.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nGrammar: <br \/>\nUsed a variety of tenses to show change in meaning \u2013 few mistakes <br \/>\nExample: It had made us very difficult to watch. <br \/>\n<br \/>\nOverall: <br \/>\nDid not complete the task------not enough words<br \/>\nOverall comment: The structure are quite good but the vocabulary is not enough. You can put more vocabulary in the review in order to add more words. The grammar is good but a bit mistake is found. The most important thing is not enough words. You only got 121 words.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}