{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"6252541","dateCreated":"1224300562","smartDate":"Oct 17, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"KathyWu","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/KathyWu","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tonycreaney.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/6252541"},"dateDigested":1532127389,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback-Kathy","description":"Structure:<br \/>\nUsed 3 or more paragraphs, separated ideas clearly into different areas<br \/>\n<br \/>\nVocabulary: <br \/>\nUsed most linking words- a good variety of vocabulary and some mistakes <br \/>\nExample : convenient store<br \/>\n<br \/>\nGrammar:<br \/>\nUsed a variety of tenses to show change in meaning \u2013 few mistakes<br \/>\n<br \/>\nOverall:<br \/>\nCompleted the task \u2013 few mistakes and clear meaning<br \/>\n<br \/>\nOverall comment:<br \/>\nCan use more vocab in your review","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"6238385","dateCreated":"1224257319","smartDate":"Oct 17, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"bryanau","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/bryanau","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tonycreaney.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/6238385"},"dateDigested":1532127389,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"English","description":"   They hvae use 3 or more paragraphs, it has got a clear idea for the music and it can shows it definite on the report. They have use some linking words, some different vocabulary and few mistakes.They have use one or two grammar tences to shows the deviate of the meaning but there is some mistakes on it.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n   At last, I think that this report can shows what the music video about clearly, the tences and the linking words can be shows clearly in the report. So, I think that this is a good report. Well Done!!!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"6100823","dateCreated":"1223865755","smartDate":"Oct 12, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"Winnie6023","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Winnie6023","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1223865987\/Winnie6023-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tonycreaney.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/6100823"},"dateDigested":1532127389,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"\u2606Feedback\u2606","description":"Used 3 or more paragraphs, separated ideas clearly into different areas <br \/>\n<br \/>\nVocabulary: <br \/>\nUsed most linking words- a good variety of vocabulary and few mistakes <br \/>\n<br \/>\nGrammar: <br \/>\nUsed a variety of tenses to show change in meaning \u2013 few mistakes <br \/>\n<br \/>\nOverall: <br \/>\nCompleted the task \u2013 few mistakes and clear meaning <br \/>\n<br \/>\nOverall comment:<br \/>\nThe review is good because they write the feeling of the music,what is the music about,espiecal why they recormend this music.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}