{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"6241297","dateCreated":"1224262148","smartDate":"Oct 17, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"Rachel_chan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Rachel_chan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tonycreaney.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/6241297"},"dateDigested":1532127376,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback","description":"Well done! You wrote this music review very well but there is a few typing errors. I think you should describe more about the music and the begining of the story that "Are the street which the main character walk through crowded or very quiet?" and "Why the merchant in the book shop shouted at him?" etc.
\nOverall, your music review is good and your points of view are creative. Also, the structure of it is quite good and enough.
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\nBy Rachel Chan","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"6233345","dateCreated":"1224248097","smartDate":"Oct 17, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"yumyumjelly45","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/yumyumjelly45","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tonycreaney.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/6233345"},"dateDigested":1532127376,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback","description":"A great movie review. You've mentioned all the important main points clearly, using descriptive words. But I think you could add a paragraph or a few sentences to tell readers what your talking about in the beginning.
\nOverall it is a well written review, but a few changes can be made for improvements.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}