{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"6288521","dateCreated":"1224517118","smartDate":"Oct 20, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"wolfiavivian","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/wolfiavivian","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1238647939\/wolfiavivian-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tonycreaney.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/6288521"},"dateDigested":1532127368,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"wolfiavivian~John and Winnie - Rabbit in the Headlights","description":"Structure:<br \/>\n Used one or two paragraphs, separate some ideas into different areas.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nVocabulary:<br \/>\n Used most linking words- a good variety of vocabulary and few mistakes.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nGrammar:<br \/>\n Used a variety of tenses to show change in meaning \u2013 few mistakes <br \/>\nExample:<br \/>\n The video combines with the music well.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nOverall: <br \/>\n Completed the task \u2013 few mistakes and clear meaning <br \/>\nOverall comment:<br \/>\n I think their comment is very good because there isn't any mistake in it.I think the same as them too,but I didn't think it into &quot;someone have died&quot;.I just think that men knows magic and he wanted to try it in the driveway.(Because I love to read books about magic.)","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"6252581","dateCreated":"1224300891","smartDate":"Oct 17, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"KathyWu","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/KathyWu","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tonycreaney.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/6252581"},"dateDigested":1532127368,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback-Kathy","description":"Structure:<br \/>\nUsed 3 or more paragraphs, separated ideas clearly into different areas<br \/>\n<br \/>\nVocabulary: <br \/>\nUsed one or two linking words \u2013 some different vocabulary<br \/>\n<br \/>\nGrammar: <br \/>\nUsed a variety of tenses to show change in meaning \u2013 few mistakes <br \/>\n<br \/>\nOverall: <br \/>\nCompleted the task \u2013 few mistakes and clear meaning<br \/>\n<br \/>\nOverall comment:<br \/>\nA piece of good work but the 3rd para. is not that useful as it has only 1 sentence","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"6084089","dateCreated":"1223745369","smartDate":"Oct 11, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"Phoebegui","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Phoebegui","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tonycreaney.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/6084089"},"dateDigested":1532127368,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"phoebe's common","description":"Vocabulary: <br \/>\nUsed one or two linking words \u2013 some different vocabulary but many mistakes <br \/>\n<br \/>\nGrammar: <br \/>\nUsed a variety of tenses to show change in meaning \u2013 few mistakes <br \/>\n<br \/>\nOverall: <br \/>\nCompleted the task \u2013 few mistakes and clear meaning <br \/>\n<br \/>\nOverall comment:<br \/>\ndiscribe the music video very detail .","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}