{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"6252253","dateCreated":"1224298818","smartDate":"Oct 17, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"sunnywong122","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/sunnywong122","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tonycreaney.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/6252253"},"dateDigested":1532127532,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback","description":"Structure:
\nUsed one or two paragraphs, separate some ideas into different areas
\nExample:In the first paragraph,they talked about their felings about this song.In the second paragraph,they talked about overall impression of this song.
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\nVocabulary:
\nUsed most linking words- a good variety of vocabulary and few mistakes
\nExample:they used some linking words like although,but...
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\nGrammar:Used a variety of tenses to show change in meaning \u2013 few mistakes
\nExample:They used some tenses like past tense,present tense...
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\nOverall:
\nCompleted the task \u2013 few mistakes and clear meaning
\nOverall comment:It is good because they have their own feelings aboet this song.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}