{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"6128005","dateCreated":"1223973451","smartDate":"Oct 14, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"whk","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/whk","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tonycreaney.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/6128005"},"dateDigested":1532127534,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Shing and Jeffrey - Where's your head a","description":"Vocabulary: <br \/>\nUsing a lot of vocabulary , it's great!!<br \/>\nGrammar: <br \/>\nTheir grammar is good , although there are some mistakes , but not much . <br \/>\nOverall: <br \/>\nGood organizing , but if there are 1-2more paragraphes , it would be much better .","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"6127707","dateCreated":"1223971468","smartDate":"Oct 14, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"QCQC","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/QCQC","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tonycreaney.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/6127707"},"dateDigested":1532127534,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedbacks on Shing and Jeffrey - Where's your head at ","description":"Structure<br \/>\nUsed 3 or more paragraphs, separated ideas clearly into different areas<br \/>\nExample: It was separated into 4 paragraphs, paragraphs 1-2 about the story of the video and paragraph 3 with their own opinions of the background music and the 4th paragraph with their questions about the music video.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nVocabulary: <br \/>\nUsed most linking words- a good variety of vocabulary and few mistakes <br \/>\nExample: meaningless , hit-and-miss affair,disgusting<br \/>\nlinking words: when,then...<br \/>\n<br \/>\nGrammar: <br \/>\nUsed a variety of tenses to show change in meaning \u2013 no mistakes Example: past tense talking about the story and their opinions<br \/>\n<br \/>\nOverall: <br \/>\nCompleted the task \u2013 few mistakes and clear meaning <br \/>\nOverall comment: I agree with it's opinion. Good organising, good views. You have did a good job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}