{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"6252447","dateCreated":"1224299951","smartDate":"Oct 17, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"NicoleLove","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/NicoleLove","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1223896644\/NicoleLove-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tonycreaney.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/6252447"},"dateDigested":1532127146,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"*Feedback*","description":"Structure:
\nUsed one or two paragraphs, separate the compare to Ted-clark.
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\nExamples: They write their own feeling about this song and the summary of the video into the first paragraph. And their common and the comparison between Galvanise and Ted-clark.
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\nVocabulary:
\nA variety of vocabulary with few mistakes
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\nGrammar:
\nUsed two tenses, and it can show the meaning
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\nExamples: They use the present tense and past tense. Using present tense while talking about their comment and used past tense while talking about the content of the music video.
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\nOverall:
\ngood review with few mistakes and clear meaning
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\nOverall comment:
\nA very good job with funny comment and lots of feelings. Having two tenses to show the meaning of your review.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}