{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"6106517","dateCreated":"1223908111","smartDate":"Oct 13, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"Shingshing","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Shingshing","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tonycreaney.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/6106517"},"dateDigested":1532127109,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback on Winson and Herman - Galvanise","description":"Structure: <br \/>\nUsed 3 or more paragraphs, separated ideas clearly into different areas <br \/>\nExample: seperated into 6 paragraphs, paragraphs 1-3 about the story of the video and 4-6 of their own opinions of the song and the video.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nVocabulary: <br \/>\nUsed most linking words- a good variety of vocabulary and few mistakes <br \/>\nExample: vocabularies: exaggeratedly,peculiar,nimbly...<br \/>\n         linking words: however,so,and,but,while...<br \/>\n<br \/>\nGrammar: <br \/>\nUsed a variety of tenses to show change in meaning \u2013 many mistakes <br \/>\nExample: past tense talking about the story and their opinions, but not using present tense so much.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nOverall: <br \/>\nCompleted the task \u2013 few mistakes and clear meaning <br \/>\nOverall comment: It's better to use present tense instead of past tense when you're talking about you're opinions, but in summary, you did a good job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}